Hello! Thank you for auditioning for Commander Coors! I was wondering if you would be able to do a second recording for your audition, with some added notes if thats ok. Just for context Coors and his crew are in the middle of battle, so a lot of what he's saying, including tone, are heightened up by a hundred. It's a very intense moment, so he's experiencing a lot of frustration, fear, pressure to keep his crew alive. There’s a lot happening around him, since essentially his whole ship is falling apart around him and crew members are either hurt or dead. It’s a no win scenario, but he's continuing to fight on.
One other note, this is my fault on it, but I forgot to highlight Coors' other line. It starts with "Tactical! Relay to starboard...."
Anyways, I look forward to listening to your second recording! Thanks!
Hi. Thank you so much for taking the time to share some direction. I'm reasonably new at voice acting and I really appreciate you giving me the opportunity to give it another go. Here's a link to the file: https://drive.google.com/file/d/1M_aSV1jHRCyKjkxjh1y9utKD14deSVha/view?usp=drive_linkEven if I'm not the right person for the role, thank you again for your kind reply! It means a lot.