We loved your little improv line at the beginning there! Totally fits with his character. Quick question, do you have a pop filter? We really enjoyed your take but would like to filter out some of the plosives for when the Captain speaks up, especially with the "P"s!
Can't say I do have a pop filter, but shifting the distance of the microphone might resolve that, was admittedly holding the Snowball at the time (Mattress aren't very level!) which may have been a factor. Glad you liked the improv line, and looking to invest in a pop filter shortly.