I love your work! Definitely my favorite so far! The only thing is that's kind of MIDI video gamey, and you can tell that. But I definitely think you understand what i'm going for and we can work around it.
Thank you :)It sounds videogamey because it was originally made for an arcade-ish rhythm game. Unfortunately while I do have better examples for the style than what I submitted, they're all a part of various projects that are still ongoing.