this is a much better take, maybe try adding a little more gravel in your voice? You don't have to do all three lines though for that lol.
Thank you for the guidance! I've uploaded the next take.
Voice Actor
Her voice is very gravelly and rugged. She has a deep rough voice in a way similar to Sakura Ogami from Dangranpa or Jasper from Steven Universe.
Sakura's Voice -
https://youtu.be/PWzqAysH5cM?si=vtM_crs3A4_xPAX-
Jasper's Voice -
https://youtu.be/3Q8jnn7VQkg?si=eO8frq-fCeQMElRk
This Rival is as the title said, a Disgraced Fighter. She is rigid, rough, violent, but also stoic and silent. She is one of the strongest students in the school but also one of the most feared.
You've got a lot of nerve standing there, staring at me like that. Most people run when they see me coming
You actually stood your ground and then... apologized? I don't know what kind of game you're playing, but for the first time in a long time, I don't feel like fighting."
Back off, unless you want to see exactly why they called me a disgrace.
