1 dropp of blood, 3 deads

TheLemurKing for Proof reader.

TheLemurKing
TheLemurKing auditioning for Proof reader. in 1 dropp of blood, 3 deads
Deszka_And_Kolok
Deszka_And_Kolok

Hi! Thank you for applying as a proofreader! I tried to open your Google Doc, but it says that I don’t have permission to access it. I think the sharing settings are currently restricted. Could you please change the sharing settings to “Anyone with the link can view” (or comment, if you prefer)? Once you’ve updated the permissions, I should be able to open and read it. Thank you very much!

Deszka_And_Kolok
Deszka_And_Kolok

Thank you for fixing the document! I had a quick look through it, but I was in a bit of a rush, so I couldn’t check everything properly. I’ll go through it more carefully when I get home, and I’ll also run it through AI for a second opinion. 🤗 You’ll receive a notification soon about the result of your application. Thank you again!

Proof reader.
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Proof reader.

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Role went to: TheLemurKing

You will proofread and edit 1 Drop of Blood, 3 Murders.

For your audition, please:

  1. Correct the grammar, spelling, and punctuation mistakes in the text below.

  2. Improve any sentences that sound unnatural.

  3. If you have any suggestions to make the writing better, feel free to include them.

Text:

Emma looked at Noah with tears in her eye’s. “I know your not the killer,” she sayed quietly.

Noah looked away. “Everyone thinks I did it… maybe they will never beleive me.”

The cold wind blowed through the empty street’s of Tromsø. Somewhere in the darkness, somebody was watching them.

Freya smiled to herself. “Soon there wont be anyone left between me and Noah.”

Police Chief Henrik Johansen close the case file and sighed. Every clue pointed too Noah, but something still didnt feel right.

Good luck! 🤗

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