I see potential here, but it needs some tweaks, and I suggest you hear the official voice to see where you adjustments
Thanks for the feedback!I'll see what I can improve when I have some time.If you wouldn't mind, could you explain a bit more about the specific tweaks it needs and what I can work on? That way, I’ll have a clearer idea of what I can do better.
Sorrrrry it took long to respond back but me and the casting director reached a conclusion about what you should improve on and that is your tone.Again as I suggested with the others check references as much as you can from the official voice.(I'm so sorry about the delay)
Ty!!! And no need to apologize^^