The voice you're doing is great for her! Line 3 could have a little more emotion though, sounds the same as Line 1's emotion(also thank you for telling me you resubmitted, I was like huh? where's the other notifcation! xD)
I can redo line 3 and submit it again if you'd like, and thank you for letting me know that it sounds too similar to the first line!
It'd be great if you tried out again if you want to! ^^