This is SUPER DUPER AWESOME!!!! Ty for being the first audition applicant ever on here btw, appreciate it. As for an input; I think this is a very good start. You've embodied his charismatic, showman attitude perfectly, and I adore your voice on him.

The main thing I'd love to hear in a possible redo is a little more energy and passion in some parts. I feel like you have a really good interpretation of his voice already, but there were a few moments where it sounded like you were holding back slightly, so I'd love to hear you push the performance even further! Don't be afraid to go a little over-the-top with the enthusiasm, the dramatic reactions, the changes in tone, and the overall energy!

I also think adding a bit more variation between lines could help. He can go from incredibly excited and charismatic to suddenly serious, frustrated, manic, or even almost panicked, so you have a lot of room to play around with his emotions. I know some of the lines can be difficult to perform when you're just reading them from a script, so don't worry about making every delivery perfect! Honestly, I'd rather hear you have fun with the character and exaggerate a little than feel like you're trying to stay too controlled.

But overall, I genuinely love what you've done with him so far, and I think your voice fits the character really well. This is absolutely a great start, and I'd be very excited to hear what you do with him if you decide to push the performance even further.