the startled and running is kinda bad but i can work on that, this is my first time voice acting
Your voice isn't bad, but the audio quality is pretty poor. I strongly recommend getting a better microphone. I use a blue snowball at the moment, and I Plan to get a Blue Yeti next year at some point. A snowball is a little expensive but a solid price for what you're getting.
im hopefully going to do that this christmas