(Short) What's In Your Pocket?
HoloMaru for Excited High School Girl
The character's avatar is Kyu from CLANNAD, as you can see, but it is only an avatar, and not the character you are portraying.
This girl has a high pitched voice, but of course not to the annoying level. ;D
(Really excited) Wanna know what's in my pocket!? iiiiiiiit's AYDS!!
(Really happy) You want some? Hahaha, no, go fuck yourself. (remember! happy!)
Alright, I gave the first line another go! Just the first one, mind; I had to get it right!
I'm sorry to say, but it seems like you recorded the same thing as last time ^^; I think you need to be a little more "smug" or "playful" when you say the line. Think of it as if you have something amazing in your pocket, and you're trying to make the guy jealous. Also, I still can't stress how perfect the second line is, I can't stop smiling XD
Agh, sorry. Guess I’ll have to do it again. So, super excited, but also kinda smug. And thanks for the compliment on my second line, it was a lot of fun to record.