CONTROL; A Minecraft Murder Mystery
Suna for Marcus Remedius
Lore
Marcus is a seventh grader in Eli's school, who was kind hearted and had a good bunch of friends. He was, unfortunately, a prime target for Juniper. Junie threatened his friend's safety, who he coincidentally liked. Like that. Marcus had to submit to Junie to avoid this, losing all his friends and becoming what people saw as a cruel, conniving bastard. After Juniper's death, he works to atone for his sins to regain hope of living a normal life.
Personality
Introvert, Emotional, Caring
Voice Guide
Marcus is an emotional introvert, and thus makes sure he is heard when the topic concerns him emotionally. Though usually, he avoids conversations as his overwhelming guilt makes him see himself as what he was transfigured into, and he finds it hard to talk to anyone. He cares for others, but nobody cares for him, or atleast he thinks. He is always soft spoken in conversations and feels happier when he feels he has made a step in his mission to atone.
He is meant to sound like a deeper, more young sounding version of Yuji Itadori's dub voice from Jujutsu Kaisen.
- english
- warm
- 12 Years old
- Emotional
- Introvert
- traumatized
- male child
- american
- audacity
Marcus talks to Eli about his transition into delinquency: "She forced me into submission, and nobody was there to help me."
Marcus tells Eli about his frustrations: "Yeaaaahhhh... keep the crush a secret. She traded my friend for hurting me a lot. Makes me wonder how useful the student council and the teachers are."
the second line drags the "yeahhh" in a tone like you just shared something embarrassing, if it makes sense.
Id prefer if you made your voice sound ever so slightly more youthful, as it sounds more 15 years than 12. Please do a retake if possible, your voice's too deep.