The character was described as tough, intimidating, and resilient, but the lines are soft and emotional. I'll just say that better lines could have been used for representing the description, but I gave it the best I could with more emotion, less tough-guy.

I like the input. The critisism is good. But do me a favor, send me an email with the following lines recorded how you see fit [email protected] “No! Dammit, I told them specifically what to do and who needed to do it! Reggie, you keep Galvax’s focus away from the bush. I’ll be right back.” “Kaitlyn. I swear, if you don’t shut up and listen to me for once I can’t be held responsible for what I do next.” “Both of you; lock it down; now! Keep arguing and see how far it’ll get you. You two are lucky we’re so far out from the village. Otherwise, I’d have shut you both up myself!”