Thanks for the audition and your interest in this project! I feel your voice maybe better suited for the character Shidan, would you mind submitting an audition for him as well? As a note, even though you did three takes for each one they all sounded very similar. Try to focus on conveying different emotions for each take. And take it slow, you tended to rush through parts of the line, don't be afraid to pause and enunciate.
Thank you for the criticism and I wanted to audition for multiple roles from the beginning so I'm all for auditioning for Shidan. I will most likely upload it on Monday.