The Legend of Zelda: Ocarina of Time (audiobook project)- a novelisation by DragonRand100
SovereignEliseVA for Aveil (Gerudo commander)
Potential spoilers ahead
Aveil is a Gerudo who serves as a lieutenant in Ganondorf's army. When Ganondorf takes over Hyrule, she quietly disapproves of his methodologies and how he has treated his subjects since ascending Hyrule's broken throne. She is frustrated by the lack of progress the Gerudo have in their long war and pressured by food shortages and an increasingly poor morale. Her scene takes place in the Lost woods, where the Gerudo have camped, during the end of the Forest Temple arc.
Aveil looked down at the dark-haired Gerudo kneeling on the mat before her, lips trembling with a barely contained rage. Maintaining any measure of self-restraint, or any of the dignity expected of her rank, was getting quite difficult, and she had to fight the urge to start pacing again. It never seemed to help anyway.
Three! How could you let three children escape?
"I am disappointed in you, Shinju. I expected better of you than to let three children escape while under your care," she said with a calm she did not feel. "What of their fairies? They cannot have gone far without them."
"The fairies are missing too," Shinju answered. "The guards didn't see anything."
Aveil pinched the bridge of her nose. "So you're telling me two overlarge torch bugs just got out on their own, and nobody saw them?"
Nice work, I like how you delivered those lines, despite the fact it doesn't give you much insight into the story. Are you happy to read the entire script for your character, not just the dialogue?