Take It Again: ep 6
Eli Meteor for LED-Boy
LED-Boy is the protagonist for a new platformer video game. He is a mute protagonist who communicates through short words and punctuation illuminated by a metronome style LED rod on his head, but needs to have a fun playful voice for vocal efforts.
*Small jump* *Big jump!*
(Pondering a puzzle) Hmmm… (Something in the area to be found) Hmmm? (Excitedly solved a puzzle). Hmmm!
*Light damage taken* *Medium damage taken* *Large damage taken*
Heya Meteor! Thank you for Slating your audition, reading through instructions is actually a very commonly missed item, so good job!
I liked your jump efforts, but I noticed for your BIG jump you basically did the same style of delivery for both takes. It was a GOOD style, but when you have two takes I would try to diversify the performance to give me as the producer more variation to choose from.
One thing I think might have been misunderstood was that the character is not meant to have any dialogue, the only actual WORDS would come from his little animations, and I was looking for actual verbal sfx. Hmmmmm... as opposed to verbalizing his thoughts.
Really liked your damage efforts, a good variety of style, simple, pitch and volume variance without shifting the character voice, very well done there~
Thank you for your submission!
Thank you for the feedback! This does help a lot! I almost make sure to read anything I'm auditioning for thoroughly, always important!Good point about the jump, I will totally keep that in mind for things I do where I have less takes to do. Usually if its more than 2 takes I do a lot more variety wise. But it should be the case no matter how many takes.And OOPS lol, I took the things in the parathesis LITERALLY and improvised a bit on accident. Force of habit since I work a day job doing improv all day.Thank you again for the feed back! Opportunities like this go a long way.
All of our habits good and bad slip into everything we do, so all good there! I'm glad that this was helpful! :D