Heya! Couple things at the top, make sure you're reading full instructions, as I'm missing the slate at the beginning of the auditions. Slating is where you give your name/handle before the audition.

I felt your editing was a bit too tight with this, I'd give half a second or so more between the efforts so that I as the producer have a clear sample in my head as it goes from one effect to the other. It's tricky with efforts like this because they're SO short. Also the editing when it's this much cutting of silence between the actual efforts, make sure you're doing it in a way where I don't hear the editing... I hear little pops between quite a few of the takes where the cuts happen. It's not a big deal, especially as I'll likely be doing the editing on the end product, but anything that might distract the producer while listening to an audition is distracting them away from your performance, so the more we can do to better our chances, the better.

Thank you for doing two takes, however in some of the effort they are nearly identical between takes 1 and 2. Take the 'big jump' effect in the beginning. If you listen to them back to back, they're very very close to the same thing. When you have an opportunity to do two takes, try to vary the performance to show range and flexibility! It'll be much more impressive to the one hiring.

I DO appreciate you adding some extra efforts at the end! You're one of the few who did, so good on you taking the initiative! And thank you for your submission!