Hey! Thanks a lot for auditioning for Barry — I appreciate you taking the time. I like your voice for the character, but could you try a retake with a slightly more natural, conversational tone? You don’t have to sound too heroic — think of it more like Barry reflecting to himself rather than giving a speech.

Also, try taking it a bit slower and letting the words breathe. Barry’s thoughtful, so a calm, reflective pace will fit better than a rushed delivery.

Thanks again — can’t wait to hear your updated take!