"Evermore" [A full length 3D animated series]
pforestonthemic for Jaune Craddock
[Amused as he finds the claim ridiculous.]
1)"Similar? Us? We're both street rats, 'bout all the similarities we have. Example, I don't go walking around scowling at everyone."
[Irritated and a little disgusted.]
2)"You use that word, Malignant, like being one robs a person of their humanity. Is that really how you see people? Hell, you're a Malignant...is that how you see yourself?"[Should have a somber tone, like he's reminiscing while also being a little silly.]
"You know, when I first met you, I thought...this chick is in desperate need of a vacation. I still think that but it's not the point. Point is: I understand 'why' now. I understand why no matter how many times or how hard life knocks you on your ass, you always come back swinging. That kid really is something special, has this way of making you forget about all the...unfair shit in the world. I get why you would go so far to protect that. Just remember: That little girl isn't going to want a future where you're not there beside her."[Should sound distracted at first, as you near the end of the line his words become more direct and focused.]
"~And to answer your question...the reason I can run dick first into this manmade hell is because I have someone worth fighting for, someone that deserves a tomorrow. Certainly more than most do. You really just can't help but to love the girl...and 'love' makes us do crazy things...and yeah, this? This is crazy."
Sorry for the late response, I thought your audition was very well done. Your tone is a little high for Jaune but does fit some other characters if you'd like to audition for them once their added to the casting call. That's not to say you can't re-audition with some adjustments, I encourage it actually. If I were to critique, pacing was good but you allowed yourself to go monotone, generally at the end of some lines. You had a few stumbles when reading but that's easily fixed with more takes. Some of the changes you made to the lines, "knocks your ass down" as an example, sound a little odd and not quite natural. Still, I enjoyed the audition. Quality was good, sounded consistent, and you were subtle when emoting. Which is a good talent to have, some people can be over the top and misrepresent what a scene is meant to convey. To me subtlety is very important. Really, good job and if you feel like it, please do audition again for either Jaune or future male roles. Thank you for the audition and your time.
Thank you so much I'm glad you like my sound I really appreciate it and I would gladly redo the audition and make the tweaks and hopefully nail the sound your looking for