Fun read Aaron! Very classy advertisement sounding. Almost have that trans-atlantic accent from the 40's/50's. Fun and pretty goofy, fitting the script quite well.

I will say we can go ahead and slow the pace way down though, I know the kind of delivery we are trying to evoke has that rapid clip to it, but our own pace should never sacrifice script clarity and accuracy for the character acting. We stumbled a few time in the read, lost a few words, and mumbled some lines. As voice actors we want to have that perfect script clarity and would want to stop at each of those moments and re-take those mistakes. When we flub, stop, go back up to a natural break point like the start of the sentence or a comma, and retry the line. Slowing down, giving our eyes and brain enough time to read ahead and prep for each line gets us to make less mistakes in the moment and also more ability to realize we've made a mistake and correct it in the moment.

As for projection we were at a solid 7/10 I feel for the read. Right where I think it's appropriate for giving a speech to a gym. Filling the room nicely and getting everyone to hear you. The confidence in your delivery also carries the lines quite nicely onwards.

Overall a nice read here Aaron, if a touch quick. Great work! Looking forward to hearing more!