Nice read here Indie, good and strong! We hit a nice 7/10 for most of the script I feel, a good delivery that fills a room neatly. There were a few moments we went softer which would probably be a little harder to hear but overall nice projection. Trying to ensure an entire read that's as long as this script is equally supported through the script's entirety can be a bit of a challenge though!

The read felt a bit like a classic trans-atlantic broadcast. Super fitting for the script. As for the pace I would ask you to slow down just a bit. Not necessarily the actual speed of delivery but the speed of reading. Give yourself a bit more time to read ahead and plan the delivery as we had a "reading" quality to the take here. I could hear you reading the script and then reciting it. Give yourself a bit more time to read ahead and perform the script to get that "reading" tone worked out of the delivery.

Overall a strong and fun read Indie! I enjoyed it and look forward to hearing more!