HW Review:

Hey Tobin, this is a great read! You jumped in with a faster pace, but not so quickly that you lose your clarity of speech and you still make plenty of room throughout the script to take breaths so you can keep your energy and projection levels consistent without straining yourself. Nice work on that!

You sprinkle a lot of small, quick breaths into the script and that helps you tremendously to carry you through the entire read, but I feel you are limiting your ability to really add BOOM to your voice as a result.

You could hit that projection even more if you slowed down a little and allowed yourself space to take longer, deeper breathes to give your diaphragm power it needs to really PUSH your voice out. Once you grasp that slower, deeper breath control, you'll be able to experiment more freely with changing up the pacing and energy of the performance.

You did a great job, keep it up!