Good effort into this! We have a great baseline to start off with. 

So the first thing that I hear is your projection, you’re almost at my sweetspot which is going to be an 8, right now you’re at a 6.5, so you just have to push it just a little bit more, just reach out to a little bit more of a farther target when you try to project your voice. Maybe take a bit more of a deeper breath when it comes to this also. 

When it comes to your pronunciation and enunciation, there’s some flubs here and there but that’s okay! Just gotta tighten it up a little bit, and maybe slow down so your brain can catch up a little bit more and that can help prevent the flubs and minor word slurring. 

There are some change ups, you have a naturally conversational voice! You have points where you are changing things up, but it still can get a little bit consistent for me, so you just gotta keep changing it up a bit more consciously, as that can really help you get your stuff altogether. 

Like I said, that this is a nice baseline, this is definitely hitting the ground running!

Well done, Taylor! Very nice to listen to* I see this performance more on a TV add than on a noisy room full of people though (me projecting my own fear of not being loud enough on you, most probably ;) Thanks for your support, dear! Here to support you on our common quest for the perfect projection as well! :*