Great effort here and great pronunciation and enunciation throughout this read. Your words are clear and concise, which is a lot more important than you think, and it is something that really shines when it comes to this

One thing that I need to see a bit more of is the projection, right now, we’re currently at a five, while I’m going to need to hear the sweet spot of an 8! Remember that you’re in a crowded gymnasium and unfortunately your mic isn’t working, so you want to be able to heard fairly well, but without yelling at your audience, which is why I have an 8 as a sweet spot. 

Along with that, this felt like a read, and that you weren’t too enthralled with the script, and that will really help with you smiling. Sometimes, we won’t be able to read the things that we want to read, so it’d be best to fake it, and it really starts with that smile, as that smile will be able to help convince not just your audience, but yourself to really make it sound interest for yourself. 

One more thing I’d like to see more of is a bit more of is some change ups too! It’s always best to try to give something called “being conversational” something that you will hear from time to time, and that mainly means that we have to just change up how we say things from time to time! Think of how we speak in our day to day lives, we speed up, slow down, change how we emphasize different words, etc. Just something to look at during your few weeks with us. 

Thank you for submitting, great start to this!