Not a bad start here! Your projection is fairly well here, could be a bit more, you’re currently at a 7, when the sweet spot that I’m personally looking for is an 8. The projection is really good as I can tell that most of the people in the gym can hear you without the need to yell, just have to tighten that up a bit more and more. 

However, one major thing that I would like to point out, is that you sound very scared when you’re reading this, and I understand that this is can be a bit nerve racking especially with how we’ve given you this direction, but one thing to really help you out when it comes to getting rid of this fear is to smile, along with that, really try to attack these reads with confidence, and even if it’s something that you don’t might have knowledge or quite frankly, care about, try to fake it, make it sound that you are an expert by pretending that you’re talking about something that you’re really passionate about! 

One major thing that I would like to punch through is that we need to try our best and change up how you approach and say words, trying to get into the conversational aspect of this, think of how we speak to our friends and try and utilize that for these long winded reads, and make it try to sound a bit more natural, by looking into how we change emphasis on different words, changing how fast we say them etc. 

Can’t wait to see what you got for next week!