Thank you for taking the time to listen and comment on my submission!I thought you did fantastic as well. Your take was very measured and natural, I could see any single line fitting well into an actual commercial read.

Crystal clear. Very personable tone and the ending feels very genuine. It's very hard to hear your breathes. Great job!

No need to slate for your homeworks, but no worries on that! 

Other than your flub on “high quality”, I would definitely say that your pronunciation and enunciation is really good! Not much to comment and point out outside of this.

However I do think that your projection does need a good bit of work. This feels like this is at a 5 when I'm looking for the sweetspot of an 8. Your voice is clear, but again, just the projection needs a little bit of work. 

Another thing is that for the most of this read, it sounds a little too much like a read, not like a character saying somethingn to someone as this read feels very consistent for most of the time. Try to change things up! Changing things like how you say things with tone, or even changing the tempo can really help this out. There are points where it changes up, but overall it's a bit too consistent for my tastes. 

Good start here though!