That sounds great! I really liked how you articulated each word very well at the beginning. At the same time, I thought the beginning sounded a bit rhythmic. The latter part was great too. I thought that the rhythm was better at the end. I thought the energy was good at the beginning. Towards the end I felt like you could add a little more energy. Overall, I thought it was great.

Great smile to start things off! You gave a very good warm read to this! And it stays throughout this read, which is really good, as stamina is something that is really important when it comes to reading things like this. 

So this read is somewhat consistent, which is something we strive to avoid, because we focus on trying to sound conversational when it comes to this. Try to change up your pacing, you do it towards the end, but something to keep in mind moving forward with this. Think of how we speak to each other and one another in our day to day lives, we change how we say somethings, like how fast we say something, we emphasize different words, and we even pause to let ourselves breathe. 

Your pronunciation and enunciation is good, just need to tighten up some words overall as this can come off as you slurring your words a little bit. 

Can't wait to see how you improve in the coming weeks!