Good pronunciation, but I think I heard 'entry free' instead of 'entry fee' and 'constellation' instead of 'consultation'. Still, I could tell you were having fun with the performance and you didn't sound winded.

No need to slate your homeworks, but still a good slate, but in the future when you slate, just read your name! 

The projection could use a little bit of work here as I feel like you're at a 5 while I'm looking for an 8 when it comes to this. Try to focus a bit more on a target that's far away from you and try speaking to it, without yelling, because you want to be heard and understood. 

The tempo and pacing is a little too consistent when it comes to this, you have a nice slow pace so you're allowing the script to breathe, but I'm looking for something a bit more inconsistent which goes into trying to make things sound conversational.

Your tone is very nice and is very conversational, there are clear points where you're changing how you're saying something, it does feel like you're just talking to a friend, which is definitely something we focus on here. 

Couple of flubs here and there, specifically when you say “entry fee” it's a bit slurred together. And some rushed moments when you say Avaialble, and you said constellation instead of “consultation”. Just some things to look out for. 

But this is a good start, and I can't wait to see how you level up from here!