"Evermore" [A full length 3D animated series]
theKoreanProdigy for Jaune Craddock
[Amused as he finds the claim ridiculous.]
1)"Similar? Us? We're both street rats, 'bout all the similarities we have. Example, I don't go walking around scowling at everyone."
[Irritated and a little disgusted.]
2)"You use that word, Malignant, like being one robs a person of their humanity. Is that really how you see people? Hell, you're a Malignant...is that how you see yourself?"[Should have a somber tone, like he's reminiscing while also being a little silly.]
"You know, when I first met you, I thought...this chick is in desperate need of a vacation. I still think that but it's not the point. Point is: I understand 'why' now. I understand why no matter how many times or how hard life knocks you on your ass, you always come back swinging. That kid really is something special, has this way of making you forget about all the...unfair shit in the world. I get why you would go so far to protect that. Just remember: That little girl isn't going to want a future where you're not there beside her."[Should sound distracted at first, as you near the end of the line his words become more direct and focused.]
"~And to answer your question...the reason I can run dick first into this manmade hell is because I have someone worth fighting for, someone that deserves a tomorrow. Certainly more than most do. You really just can't help but to love the girl...and 'love' makes us do crazy things...and yeah, this? This is crazy."
I'm still quite an inexperienced VA, feedback would be greatly appreciated.
Sorry, this feedback is way overdo. If I were to critique, something about your delivery sounds a little off. It's almost like you're trying too hard to play the character, you can hear how you're actively attempting to convey certain things. For this, my advice would be to relax and ease into the role. Don't think of it as 'playing' a role, in fact, don't think about it at all. Just BE the role, be natural and relaxed when recording. You said you were quite an inexperienced voice actor before, but honestly, you're not off to a bad start. I really did enjoy your audition and thank you for taking the time to submit it.
Thank you for the detailed response, it will certainly help me out a lot on other future auditions. I did get a better microphone recently, so if you wish, I can redo my audition to see if I can get it to where you want it.