Watch the pronunciation of Rennes as it is closer to pronounced as Ren. 

I like the different description when it comes to this read, but it still feels fairly one note. You mention in your description that Scrooge has only seen one ghost and that's why they have the annoyed tone. But the major thing is, there should be a prescence of that aforementioned ghost. Adding in that secondary emotion when it comes the read.

I would like to see a bit more of a change in overall direction specifically on your character's read. There are hints of it when Robin has won the race, there's just a hint of happpiness that I would like to see a lot more in this read so it doesn't feel as consistent in terms of being frustrated. 

Or maybe another angle is that at one point you see the ghost and that would scare you, so you start reading a bit more forced happy or even scared. 

There's always a way to showcase your range of emotions, always go for something different when it comes to long winded monologues like this. 

Great work, keep it up and I'll see you next week.