This is a good grasp on your audience, try to keep ages more absolute they're either 8 or 9. I would say that this read was fairly safe. It was able to get the read across very well, and there was just enough change ups, I would like to see a bit more changeups, specifically, how does the story make you feel. 

And even if you might not have an immediate thought on it, take it in a direction and then go for it, an angle that I would like to point is out is that despite her leg injury, Robin was able to walk off the podium, doesn't that seem a bit strange to you? 

There's a little bit of some awkward pausing in the beginning of the read, just gotta be careful of that, and let the read flow through just a bit. 

Keep up the work, just one more week!