So while I like your read when it comes to the change in pacing, in pronunciation, the fundamentals in total. I'm a little bit lost when it comes to seeing who your audience to a degree, I can tell that it's a friend but a lot of this you have written, is just a little too much, try to keep things semi simple as of right now. You have a great imagination, just gotta find the sweet spot of finding too much and too little. 

Be careful of the pronunciation for the word “Bromich” it's pronounced closer to “Brahm-itch” as opposed to “Broom-itch”. 

I like the change ups, the different levels of frustration coming through here, and I like it. As it's able to showcase just how long your character has been frustrated with Robin. I'd like to see a secondary emotion here like maybe a bit of pride, but this was still good. Because you were able to just showcase that despite all of this, your spite made it sound like that you are aware that despite her legs being fairly rotted, she was still able to walk off the podium. Great work on that! 

The great work has been kept up, can't wait to see what comes next week!