This was a good read to start things off! There are some clear cut choices throughout this read, and I really do like them! I just want to point out, that there is a bit of a consistency in the beginning before you start off with the different highlights. Along with that, in the beginning, your voice has a bit of an aggressive undertone, as if I’m being talked at as opposed to talked to, try your best to smile a bit more when it comes to this, as you want to give a more welcoming atmosphere when it comes to this read. And it all starts with a smile when it comes to this, sure you want to show excitement and how serious this could be, but it all starts with a smile! 

To preface, I try my best to keep a bit of an open mind when it comes to different dialects and accents, the names are well pronounced, just have to tighten up some of the consonants on some of those names, as they come off a bit slurred at points. 

I really like your disbelief when talking about Fauscher, I like how you explore that, but don’t forget to change things up when it comes to this, the attitude, the emotion was changed up, yes. But don’t forget to change things up and make sure things sound fairly conversational with this. Don’t be afraid to still change things up, fundamentally. As this feels fairly consistent in terms of pacing, tempo, and emphasis. I enjoy the risk with going for a different emotion, just don’t forget to change things up when it comes to doing things in the fundamentals.

All in all, fun risk! Keep having fun!