Class Session 4
LilTentoe for Role
Full details of homework is on Closing Credits
Sweet read LilTentoe! Casual and fun and really solid nailing the pronunciation and navigating the tongue twisting sentences.
If we were gonna hit this again, I'd want to hear more of the reverence in your voice when recounting the story. This guy's a Robin fan telling a story about the glory days. We should hear the admiration of Robin and the drama in the listing of Robin's feats. Kind of laying into the awe of the fact Robin's running through all these cities to get to Warsaw. You do a great job at the end of the read showing that kind of awe and deference to the legend when talking about her getting first place and inspiring the world but I wanna get those same sensibilities right from the start of the read! Especially with the idea that Robin is a hero to this guy. We want to ham up Robin as much as we can to get our lunch friend here to feel just as hyped as we were when we watched the race go down live. Relive those glory days! Sell more of that drama and tension, we don't want to give away that everything works out for Robin so let's get some manufactured uncertainty, pauses and cliffhangers to draw our friend in as we're telling this story.
Overall, a great and articulate read LilTentoe. Nice work!