Excellent witch/hag there Jolteon, very fun, very creepy!

Strong idea for the scene, good child voice as well! Also want to compliment your pace and clarity, really crisp and clean while maintaining the speed to grab and hold attention in a kid's cartoon. Speaking of, great use of energy and momentum to help emphasize the different sections of the story. The dramatic fall as you recount how Robin wrought rot to her legs then the rug pull as you say that it was all part of the plan! Captivating and effective. Superb work. Going from the super fast excited jiber jabber, to the slow dramatic lows, to the playful whimsical tones, you had this script down pat and very strong.

Not much else to say other than Bravo, excellent dissection and execution of the script! Absolute joy to listen to!