HW Review

I love the soft, gentle tone of your voice for this script. It was a great choice to approach the scene in this way with the setting that you're running with. Let's get a little more in-depth with the scene using some of the W's. First off, WHO are you? A teacher, a parent, a fellow child, a babysitter? WHERE are you? Is this at a daycare, at home, in a classroom, ect? WHEN is this happening? Is this to get them to settle for a midday nap or is it bed time in the evening? WHAT age are the children?

There's a good handful of W's that you can use to better understand who your character is and how they are related to the audience (in this case, the group of children). Practice expanding the setting with these kinds of questions so you can get more involved in the scene and your character.

Nice job with the pronunciations! Nailed those like a pro~

This "whisper" like voice that you've chosen for this scene uses a lot more breath than it would if you were speaking normally, and you managed that aspect of your vocal choice very well! Good placements of breaths, good relationship with the mic, and lovely work keeping your energy consistent with the scene that your portraying.

Nice work!