I loved everything about this! This sounds exactly like a chisme session and the voice you used was so convincing!

HW Review

This is a really fun concept with room to branch out. I'd love for you to reflect a bit on your 5 W's to decide WHO exactly is Robin to you (the character) and HOW do you know what happened to Robin?

Nice work on the pronunciation for the locations mentions in the script. There was only a slight misstep with the script at 1:04, where you said "round A roundabout" when the correct script is "round THE roundabout".

If you were do edit this recording, I'd suggest clipping out the pauses in between the sentences, as they sound a bit unnatural. This is likely a result of you pausing to read ahead. Keep practicing reading out loud and you will see improvement over time with your ability to read ahead without needing to pause.

This was such a fun approach to this script! I love the "valley girl" accent you've thrown in, and you did so without losing the clarity of articulation and enunciation. Also, great job on correcting your fumble at 0:32! Very solid read and performance choice. I enjoyed listening to this!