You have a nice warm smile when you read this, we just need more energy when it comes to this. For this script, I’d like to see more of an energy range here, it feels to be pretty animated, so I’d like to see some more not just in the energy overall, but like what is your low energy sound for this? What is your high energy for this? I’d like to see a bit more of that. 

Zombie noise was fairly fun, could be more sillier! Like I would love to see a bit more silliness when it comes to this, maybe a bit longer? Tempo played with? Just a couple of things to add when it comes to this part of it, creature noises are something that can be definitely played with a lot.

Be careful on some of these BGK’s specifically there was a notable tongue tie on “Kilagub Gilded Dung Beetle” and on “Gerty’s Grandmother’s Kitchen Marketplace on Koffington” In the former, it sounded like Gilakub” and on “Koffington” there was a bit of lazy speak as there was a lack of a g sound on that. Just gotta be more mindful of that!

Good consistent smile all the way through this read, keep going and keep leveling up!