Magirus
nullify for Ryu Regius
Ryu is the son of Leon, the leader of Magirus. He strongly opposes the Magirus company and how his father treats the Viruses that reside there. Ryu is included in this treatment as well so he feels trapped. In a form of rebellion, he plans for a new uniform made for himself. He meets May because of this, and she earns his trust after she showed her support of his decisions.
Ryu: [quiet, resentful] Whatever you say, Sir.
Ryu: [hesitant] H-Hold on. Do you even know your way around? This place isn’t exactly... open to humans.
Ryu: [concerned] I’m sorry Angela, things will be alright, we won’t hurt you, okay…?
i really like this audition, especially the ways you did the last line! for the first line though, and i feel like this was because the emotion written before was just simple 'anger', i was looking for a more... bitter tone? bitter, but still trying to be respectful. are you alright with redoing the first part?
Of course, do you just want the first part redone, also thank you for changing the line direction as well that makes this easier.
yes, just the first part redone. and no problem!