As mentioned in your note, yes! There is a clear focus on pronunciation and enunciation here, and there’s some good pronunciation and enunciation here, but it does falter towards the end, specifically on how you say “Casket Way” and “Coffington” watch out for those K’s and G’s! But other than the few flubs here, the separation between BGK’s could use a bit more apparency when it comes to the differentiation, but all in all this is a good start. 

Unfortunately, the energy was fairly consistent and also was a bit stilted, it sounded a bit unnatural when it comes to the conversational feeling that I am looking for usually. And finding that balance between pronunciation and energy will become more attainable and doable the more you practice this. 

Despite the energy being off, I can tell from your smile that you still enjoyed this product and was willing to sell that product no matter what. The thing is, is that zombie noise, while long, which is something I encourage when it comes to this homework script specifically, I was waiting for more of that reanimated feeling to it, more of an energy to sort of back up your claim of “reanimated fellow”. Don’t be afraid to go full on silly when it comes to doing these type of creature noises! 

Keep practicing and you will find that balance between pronunciation and energy! Keep going!