HW Review.

Hey! This is a good read. I'm going to go over some specific points that I'd like for you to work on.

The main factor that is impacting your read is your speed, which is in turn hurting your articulation. For the purpose of this practice, articulation is really important and you need to be able to hit those different consonants with more clarity. Slow down and focus on your articulation. Slowing your pace will give you more space to focus on the clarity of your speech and the areas of articulation that you are faltering on.

Nice job with the pronunciation! No issues there.

Apart from the areas of articulation that you need to work on, this is a great read. It's very casual, friendly, and natural as if you're speaking directly to a friend. Great job with the overall performance.

*EXTRA

Per the homework instructions, please provide who the audience is that you are speaking to in this script. You can reply with your answer in the comments.