Good projection to start us off, just needs a bit more to it, you're at a 6 when I'm looking for an 8. Try to practice projection by focusing on a point in your room 10 feet away, and then from there try to speak towards it, let your voice ring to it without yelling.

I know I mentioned in class that I wouldn't be judging too much on mic quality, but I notice that there's quite a bit of clipping during your read, just be wary of that as it was a bit distracting and it starts to affect the quality of your voice, as it sounds like it's warping or speeding up and slowing your voice. 

You're having fun with this read, and there is a genuine fun smile being heard throughout this. So keep that going, having fun with a script can keep retaining the audience, it keeps them paying attention and wanting to hear what you want to say. 

Try your best to mix up how you say your sentences as it comes off as a bit repetitive, try to think conversational! Think of how we speak to each other in our day to day lives, and that's another way to keep retention for your audience. 

Good work! Keep trying and keep going!