Great read here Garreth! Lots of energy and excitement, perfectly done for the script at hand. Very great stuff taking nice long breathing breaks for yourself, you set a rapid pace for yourself and stuck to it. Taking that time to stop, breathe, and read ahead is extremely well done.

Good work on the pronunciations, but I do think we were going a little fast simply on account that our script clarity was a little low. It was not bad per say, but some words and definitely some of the alliterations became a little muddled as some of our consonants were a bit mumbled from the rapid pace of the read. Wasn't bad, I would just have adjusted to be about 10% slower for sake of clarity.

Otherwise I think you performed wonderfully. A solid character, great style, fun moments like laughing about Fauscher getting hit in the face, this was a great read! Awesome stuff Garreth, looking forward to more!