HW Review

Nice job doing your due diligence to get the pronunciations correct! I think you picked a good setting that's suited to the script and to your voice.

Your performance comes across a bit flat during the first half of the script. You have a naturally relaxed voice, so you may need to put a bit more consideration into your expressions if you want more emotion to poke through. There's a few areas in the script, especially in the second half starting around 0:42, where you start to express more clearly and it adds such a beautiful shine to the story that you're telling.I love that you ended the script on an upbeat instead of a downbeat. It added the perfect "wink" to the end of the story.

Be mindful of your articulation on your "forgotten", "for", "forget", ect. You're hitting it with that very relaxed "fur" sound instead of fully articulating the "o". (I still struggle with this myself due to my southern roots lol)

You've got a great voice for narration! This was a solid performance. Nice work!