HW Review

Whoa, Era! I love the energy you went into this with! The growl on "freaky" was a great touch.

Your pronunciation is golden. I can tell you're either very familiar with these name pronunciations already, or you did some thorough research to ensure that you pronounced everything as it's supposed to be. Either way, lovely job with that. Spot on!

Let's talk about some pointers that will elevate your performance. Starting with your pacing. You've got great energy and projection, but your pacing is almost too consistent. You can vary the speed of your read to make the scenes more engaging.

There's also a couple of areas where you could drive your energy up to an extreme to really embrace scenes. For example, the scene at 0:49 where you could've punched it up, and then at 1:26 where you have this somewhat shocked reaction that then flattens abruptly and you fail to bring the scene back up to that shocking energy that you started it with.

This is a really good read. Great work! I can't wait to hear how you grow as a voice actor in the next couple of weeks!