A wonderfully comforting read here Havrand! It almost gives reading a bedtime story to your kids. Especially given the whimsical nature of the script itself. Like a Mary Poppins story mixed with Dr. Seuss Rhymes.

The sing song tone through the read is super well done, the emphasis on certain words, the up and down pattern through the script, the ways you make "nasty" and "nauseating" sound like villains in a story. Stellar delivery, I'm really into it!

Great form recovering from the mistake at the end as well.

All told this was a fantastic read sir! Top notch work, strong sense of scene, characterization, tone, pace, and delivery. Really well done Havrand! Looking forward to more!