Love the energy and spirit! It's easy to imagine the grin on your face. Try to be careful with with the gain or the amplification in post causing some sections to just barely clip.

Great energy and great variety in how you read each line. It kept me engaged as a listener.

Going for a bit too much of a character voice in the beginning here. Which at first was a bit much for me, but you keep at it and it gives a super friendly vibe. And you’re mixing things up really well! But, you have to be careful about the pronunciation and the enunciation, some of the words are slurred throughout the beginning of the latter half. But the most important thing I want you to know is that you are having FUN!!!! That’s an amazing building block that I want you to hold onto this. 

You are letting the script breathe, pausing at points so your audience can listen, but at the end, you lock in on speeding up, which causes the script to lose some luster as it’s hard to follow along, remember that your audience won’t have a copy of the script to read along with, so they need to be able to understand what is being said at all times and speaking a little too fast, albeit a good way to keep your read to be different, can cause the audience not being able to follow along. 

But a great start on this, I’m curious to see how you’d approach a more grounded read, but you’ll have plenty of opportunities to do that during this course!