Great articulation throughout, really clear read and good recovery on flubs!

Your pacing starts off well, but then you start to speed up a lot. Slow down, it causes you flub to some of your words, “while supplies last”, while you do slow down towards the middle, I’ve started to see the habit that you are specifically speeding up when it comes to the long winded list of perks throughout this, which is fairly common but you just gotta be careful around this, as if you read a little too fast, the content of what you’re trying to say will get lost around the audience and that’s not what we want, we want not just to be heard but understood. This also leads to running out of breath which is causing you to need to take a breath during sentences which can break up the flow. 

Which goes into your projection, your projection is currently at a 4, while I’m looking for it to be at an 8 right now, try your best to practice that by trying to focus on a specific point in your room when around 10 feet from where you are currently, and try to make sure that the target could hear you, usually by placing your phone or your laptop that’s recording, and make sure that you can be heard, not by yelling, but by projecting your voice. 

Other than the flubs, you have a really good articulate way of speeding, it can be clear, just have to remember to slow down and make sure that you can be understood alongside being heard. Which is definitely something I want you to take away from all this. Keep that in mind when it comes to you reading.

Good attempt, can’t wait to see what else you bring to the table!