HW Review:

Strong start on your articulation with this read. Your voice is very soothing and well-suited for a script like this!

That said, your pacing is a bit fast, and that is where your enunciation and articulation wavers.

While you hit most of the "P", "T" and "D"s with a fairly sharp clarity, everything in between gets a bit jumbled with the speed of your read. Allow yourself to slow down so you can give ample attention to the enunciation and articulation of the other words within the script as well. You want to give your listener the time to digest what you have said before you move on to the next sentence. This will be easier to achieve if you slow your pacing down overall.

Practice slowing your pacing down while you speak so you can give room for more clarity in your read. Altogether this was not a bad read! I look forward to hearing your next submission!