Thanks Jeremy.

1st read: Nice pace for discovery and playful delivery feeling out the piece. Great focus shifts and "listening/reacting". Can hear the intentional work on diction and careful pacing here, which is appropriate in rehearsal. Nice.

2nd read: conversational and irl feeling. Good struggling and thinking on your feet with this delivery. A bit distracting on breath and mouth sounds at times, but I think a lot of that is coming from the in real time discussion vibe which we can get away with more messy sounds during, and it got less distracting in latter half. Overall a very nice performance take!