haha I like the "proJeCtING!" calibration at the beginning. Nice job!

HW Review:

Hey great job with your projection! Love that you kept the "Projecting!" at the beginning. It's great to hear you putting that lead-in into effect to keep you at a desired level for the read itself. It worked! Excellent breath control. Those were some nice deep breaths placed where your pauses were to ensure that you had enough to maintain your projection.

I did notice that you were taking more of those breaths further into the read, which is purely the result of your stamina depleting. Keep up your breathing exercises and you'll be improving in no time!

Let's get into the bones of this practice; the articulation. While you were pouring most of your energy into your projection, pacing, and breath control, you unfortunately did not hit that goal of over-articulating for a majority of the read. The main challenge with this script is all of those "T" sounds, which you hit as "D"s for the most part.

For instance words like "Peder"(Peter), "Poddery"(Pottery), "Maddered"(Mattered) where that "D" sound should be hit sharply as a "T" in the practice of over-articulating.

You've got a good grasp on your projection, now you should start focusing on your articulation. I'd love for you to practice this script again in your own time. This time forego the projection, slow down, and zone in on the consonants and vowels of each word that you speak. Overall, nice work!